We walked too fast to talk

20 May

She was the girl with the pink backpack
Never walking too slow
Or too fast
We entered the same lift
Almost every morning
Her’s 18th
Mine 14th
Words were never spoken
But
He was the boy with the red backpack
Earphones always plugged in
He took the walk with long strides
Always overtaking mine
We entered the same lift
Almost every morning
Mine 18th
His 14th
Words were never spoken
But

Our paths sometimes crossed
Our paths sometimes crossed
I wished that I’ll drop something
He’ll pick it up
And say “Hey,you dropped something.”
I know,call me a dreamer
But isn’t it fun
If some part of your life
Was like a scene from the movies

I don’t know how she feels.
Boys

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2 Responses to “We walked too fast to talk”

  1. howanxious May 20, 2013 at 10:55 pm #

    I loved the writing style.. it was interesting to read two perspectives in this way.
    There are many poems which use the very same form; what is special about your poem is the intelligent usage of dual narration..

    • echoesconder May 20, 2013 at 11:08 pm #

      @howanxious Aw thank you! I am very touched by your comment! xx

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